Wednesday, August 29, 2012

A short story

If you are interested in stories heres one i wrote a couple months ago.






Storm Town        By Patrick Black
     Black clouds were on the horizon, the townsfolk bustled around in preparation of the winter days ahead. A thatcher finished the final touches on a roof, a merchant traded his last pelt, and boys brought bundles of sticks into their homes. The town of Belkarie was a small, slow moving place but farmer and butcher alike called it home. The town was fairly isolated from the outside world; once in a while the townspeople would hear distant rumors of the kingdom. Belkarie was located just 5 miles from the king’s palace but rumor was all Belkarie heard of the outside world. They didn’t care much for the problems of others; they only worried about how much food they had, where they slept, or how to survive. In this town two boys grew up together named Fern and Jack.
     They both were around the same age and both lived on the outskirts of town. Fern was married to a young woman named Jorie.
     Fern put two logs on the warm fire and stood back rubbing his hands to bring the chill out. Jorie walked up and leaned her head on his shoulder. Fern intertwined his fingers in hers, looking down on her, she smiled. Then he spoke “I could barely walk while I was at the market, it was packed, and people are getting nervous about this storm.”  Jorie merely sighed and stepped closer to the heat of the flickering flames. Inside their house bleak grey walls stood up holding up the thatched roof with their wooden arms. A few sticks of furniture sat like an island on the stone floor. A crooked bed-frame with a pile of blankets and a clean cot which made a bed sat opposite the fireplace. The fire now burned a warm orange color and smoke wandered up through the clay chimney into a darkening sky. Slowly the streets of Belkarie emptied, the sun sank behind the mountains and shown its last golden rays onto the stone roads. Specks of light appeared one by one in the heavens while the moon rose up to shine its ghostly light onto the sleeping town.
     The red sunrise spilt its bloody color on the landscape as it rose above the sleepy town. Farmers were up milking, merchants sat sleepily at their booths, and various townsfolk were up doing their daily chores. Jack woke and absent mindedly dressed himself. Eating a few crumbs of bread he hurried of to attend his own work. He was greeted with the whinny of his horse as he dumped hay into its stall. After filling his fire wood he put on a warm cloak and wandered into town. The market was already bustling with the many colors of the villagers. Inns opened their doors and windows and were serving their guests breakfast. Several people greeted Jack warmly so he waved back and smiled. Suddenly a horn sounded as the thunderous roar of galloping horses sped past. Riders all in black crested with the royal capital stopped in the street and dismounted while white steamy breath came from the flaring nostrils of the horses. After one last horn blast the commander spoke “By the order of King Crecious III all families of Belkarie must give up half their supplies...” The crowd’s chaotic screaming and shouting drowned his voice. One of the soldiers beat down an over eager member of the crowd and it became silent once again. The commander spoke again louder this time “Families must also give quarters to any soldier if needed, all horses will be taken for military use, cooperation is greatly appreciated and any resistance will be dealt with harshly, this is all for your protection.
           Jack clenched his fists in frustration, he knew how much supplies were needed especially with the storm approaching. He spotted the blonde mess of Fern’s hair and made his way toward him. As he pushed through the crowd he saw wagonloads of soldiers being pulled into town. When he reached Fern he was crossing his arms and frowning. His jaw muscles were tensed and his gaze was drawn to the commander who was remounting his horse. Fern still frowning turned to Jack and said “Jack I don’t like this, something doesn’t seem right go tell my wife all that has happened wait for me at my house I need to find something out.”  Jack replied “I agree something’s up; I’ll wait for you at your house.”  With that he started walking towards the edge of town. Fern’s grey eyes still followed the commander as he walked his horse behind the wagons. Fern moved to the opposite side of the street and followed the group of men until they stopped at one of the town’s small mansion. The building was a wide two story, white trimmed house with many glass windows. After one soldier pounded on the thick oak door the commander shouted “By the law of King Crecious III, I commander Graslvich confiscate this house for the use of the Imperial Army.” An angry aristocrat came to the door and frowned while his wife came and started yelling and spitting at the soldiers and attempted to close the thick door. With a quick motion from the black gloved hand of Commander Graslvich several soldiers pushed the closing door open forcefully. The soldiers swarmed in the mansion like ants swarm a carcass. Screams came from the house as servants ran out in fear. Commander Graslvich strode in and to the upstairs portion of the building. Fern saw through a window the woman and husband being beaten with a riding whip by the commander. The woman screamed as their harsh punishment was dealt, out soon her screams were cut short when her neck snapped and her body hung limply next to her husbands out the window for all to see. Later a sign was hung on their body’s which named them blasphemers to the king, and traitors to the royal court.
     Fern quickly made his way home feeling sick from all he had witnessed. When he reached his home Jack was still there just as he had requested and Jorie had made dinner. They ate in silence; Fern slowly ate cabbage stew and bread looking only at the table. It seemed to Jack and Jorie that the watery food and dry bread was his only vice. They did not ask any questions but finished their meals. When the dishes were cleared Jorie went to bed so Fern and Jack brought their chairs onto the porch and closed the door behind them.
Fern and Jack sat silent for a few seconds then Fern told Jack of all that he had seen. When he had finished telling about the sign and the bodies he stopped. Jack leaned forward in his chair and sadness and anger filled his face. After a few moments of thought he spoke quietly “What do they want? We don’t need protection!! We are completely isolated to start with!! Do you really think they work for the king?” Fern’s brow was furrowed and he answered “I can’t answer those things friend, but I think we just need to mind our own business and maybe these soldiers will be a help.” But this was not enough for Jack he stood and said “Fern! These men are going to take our food! And our horses….My horse!!! All for some protection that we don’t need! I can’t just mind my own business this is a problem!” Fern shook his head and replied “Jack you are too hot blooded, things will work out, you’ll see.” Jack shrugged and walked off into the night to his own house saying “good night.”   That night the dark clouds poured water from their billowing bodies. Thunder boomed as the torrent of rain came down onto the earth. Bone chilling wind whipped around the town gnashing its icy teeth over the thatched roofs of the villagers. The parched earth gratefully swallowed the winter rain.
     When morning came only a light drizzle of rain painted the land. Little streams flowed down the roads and puddles formed miniature lakes on walkways. Cold wind swayed the trees in a rhythmic creaking and bending. The people sat in their homes next to warm fires hiding from the cold fingers of winter. Blankets and warm drinks did not go unwelcome on this cold day. A few Imperial soldiers traveled around town collecting half of every homes food, wood, and money and threw it into their cart. This continued for a few hours until the cart finally was pulled away with its wobbly wooden wheels from the last home of Belkarie. Fog and smoke floated low in the town trapped under the cold leaving thick smog and discouraging anyone who wished to be out and about.
     Fern and Jorie lay in front of their fire playing cards to pass the time. Jack filled his firewood stack for the nth time that day while the rain had paused.  He looked sadly toward his empty stable feeling resentful towards the soldiers who took him just hours before. Then he thought of the man and woman that Fern had said were murdered. He thought how unfair it was for the soldiers to come into their calm and peaceful little town and demand and take things unlawfully. He threw down his fire wood and stormed into town trying to take his mind off the soldiers. He didn’t know where he was going but he was going. He walked towards the butchers store to possibly buy some meat if he had enough money. When he reached the store his heart sank, the door was wide open, which it never was, and three soldiers stood laughing as they stole good meat. One soldier was holding the butcher while the others taunted him saying “oooh I bet this one would be a good seller…fresh too” and he threw it in the mud and took more meat and stuffed it in a sack. The laughing soldiers walked out to face Jack glaring at them with hatred. The soldiers snickered at him and shouldered him roughly. They kept walking and Jack just watched. A young woman walked into the street from her house and the soldiers shouted and whistled with glee. They all rushed around her and one grabbed her and pulled her down. Jack had to intervene. He ran at the men and tackled the first. They all jumped on him and Jack viciously kicked, bit and punched all around. Finally a soldier untangled himself from the brawl and unsheathed his sword he grabbed Jack from the ground and pummeled him the hilt of his sword. Before Jack was beat to death the menacing voice of Commander Graslvich shouted “ENOUGH!”
     Jack could barely see the commander’s feet through his swollen eye as he walked towards him. The soldier s pushed Jack to his knees, stepped back, and Graslvich addressed the gathering crowd “Look! Look at this fool who is drunk with wine and thinks he can fight my soldiers, this is what happens….”  Although the truth was not told the truth was not needed to make an example of him. The commander raised his leather whip and struck Jack with six metal studded tongues of leather. He smiled with every stroke but Jack was barely conscious. When blood pooled all around Jack he finally blacked out. Graslvich sneered with disgust and kicked Jacks body over and let him fall in his own blood and walked away. No one helped Jack, fearing a similar fate. The rain washed away the pain and blood from his body as Jack lay on the stone. He didn’t move or wake but lay unconscious.  Fern arrived and ran to Jack’s still body. He rolled him over and asked “Jack!! Jack, can you get up?”  Jack sat slowly up and groaned in pain. His shirt was ripped and stained with blood; his cloak had been torn off in the fight and lay trampled and muddy in the street somewhere.  Fern knelt by him and said “what happened? Why are you hurt?”  While he asked this he took a ripped piece of Jack’s shirt and dabbed it at his shoulders and face. Jack answered “Ouch! Well I walked into town to visit the…Ouch! butcher and when I got there three soldiers…Ouch careful…were stealing his meat then…. Ouch!!.... Then they went for some poor girl so I stopped them, that…Ouch!... Graslvich did this to me and said that I was drunk!” Fern stopped cleaning jacks cuts and sighed. Jack continued “Fern they have to be stopped!”  Fern looked up into Jacks green eyes and answered “Well you can’t do it alone…”
     That night the rain continued to pour and lightning crackled along the sky. Light spilled from the cracks of the stable walls. On the inside noise and chaos filled the building, Fern sat quiet at the large fire and Jack stood on a chair trying to quiet everybody down. All the men of Belkarie gathered inside the stable, all who called Belkarie home, and all who wished to protect it stood with clubs, torches, knives, and pitchforks. Finally Jack got every ones attention and the room quieted down and Jack spoke “Men tonight we exterminate a pest that has infested our peaceful town, these soldiers have come into our simple lives and nothing has been the same…”  He was interrupted by a man who yelled “They murdered the Arvin’s!!”  and another said “They robbed my store”  The crowd all shouted with agreement. Fern stood and spoke “Then let no more words be wasted while our enemy’s sleep.” A man shouted “LETS GET THEM!!!”  The stable shook with the shouts and running feet of the villagers as they stampeded toward the mansion. Fern and Jack were at the head of the mob holding clubs. The mob raced through town holding their torches high to light the way. When they reached the house, where the soldiers were sleeping, they broke down the door. Surprised and sleepy soldiers had no time to reach for their weapons but had their heads bashed in by Fern, Jack, and the rest of the mob. They killed all the soldiers on the ground floor and stormed upstairs. By the time they reached the top floor the soldiers had drawn their weapons, the mob rushed at them. Most of the villagers in the front line were cut down by the blades of the soldiers. The rest trampled the soldiers down and stabbed them to death with knives and pitch forks. The soldiers pushed the mob back down part way the stairs. The fight was at a standstill, bodies were thick on the floor and dark blood made the wood slick.
     Commander Graslvich stepped forward holding a villager by his hair by one hand and a long sword in the other and said “This is what happens to those who oppose the Imperial Army!”  He drug the blade of his sword slowly across the man’s neck and then deeper and quicker away. The man clutched his throat and crimson blood squirted through his fingers and poured from his mouth. “Burn you pig!” Fern spat out and threw his torch. The torch spun through the air several times before finding its target, the lit end stuck strait into Graslvich’s eye. He screamed in pain and stumbled backwards. His body fell back onto a barrel of torch oil and suddenly it exploded. The whole back wall of the mansion was almost gone or on fire and the floor was cracked and broken. The floor suddenly lurched and collapsed with the live and dead soldiers. The mob ran back down the stairs and barely avoided being crushed. Many of the men had been badly wounded from the explosion and been trampled on the way down on the stairs. Soon most of the house was ablaze and the mob stampeded out the door into the mud. When they looked back sweating and covered in battle gore they saw the house collapse in a flurry of smoke and flame. The rain slowly put out the fire and sizzled on the hot coals of the mansion. No one spoke as they watched the rain turn what once was a house into rubble. No one spoke as they watched the embers and heat consume the charred bodies of both their companions and the soldiers they slaughtered. No one spoke as the sunrise broke through the clouds and revealed the new day.   




THE END

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